I am excited for the process ahead of us in writing our personal narratives. I am ready to see what my final draft will look and sound like, this being my first personal narrative I have eber written. But, I think I'm struggling with a few things. I have trouble expressing my voice, personality, and feelings/thoughts onto paper. Those are very important to narratives. I also wonder if my paper is descriptive and has good detail and is easy to read. Hopefully so, because I think it is. I think to myself and wonder, how can I express my feelings and thoughts more? How exactly do I have good voice for my paper? What other things do I need to work on? Hopefully I can work on all of these things successfully to have a good paper.
I love the ocean breeze that gives me please, I walk through the sand, virgin margarita in my hand. The sun soaks my skin so well, The beach has a very amazing smell. The sky looks so blue in the sky, Trust me, I would never lie. So many fish swimming through the sea, I sit under an umbrella with a cup of tea. I love the beach ever so much, I love my beach beach beach beach beach. I used Assonance, Alliteration, and Internal Rhyme. In line one I used internal rhyme to give the reader a sense of entertainment as an introduction. In line 3 I used alliteration to give a catchy vibe to the poem. At the end I added assonance to add a mark at the end of the poem so people will remember the poem and my main message.
In class on Friday when we did that activity on being stranded, I noticed how important working together is. Without teamwork we couldn't consider different aspects on things and how to approach them. Teamwork and working with other people helps you recognize things you might not have at first. When you work together, a lot can also get done faster. One way I've seen proof of this is through sports. For example, in basketball everyone has to be in the right spot on the court at the right time and work together to score or defend. Same thing in football, everyone has to work together to be successful. Without teamwork, things would be chaotic. Teamwork is a great way to solve things.
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