VOMEW Response

     This story was very interesting. It was about a man with wings that ended up in a family's courtyard. People from all over came to see him, but he eventually left. I found the story interesting because of it's uniqueness and quality. I liked the atmosphere and mood of the story. It explained how the family felt about the angel and how other people found it amusing. But you could tell the angel wasn't comfortable or happy.

     When people came, they treated him as a circus animal and were very curious. They didn't really have respect for it. There was a moment in the story where he had tears and flapped his wings in pain/ anger. The family which owned the property he stayed at made money off people coming to visit, but they were alarmed and annoyed by his presence. Once he finally left they were relieved.

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